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Stable is the most reliable version of Fedora CoreOS. Each Stable version has been field-tested as a Testing version before it is recommended for use. a year ago |
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The sentences are pompous. There is a jump from singular to plural, from 'version' to 'Releases'. The second sentence does not even suggest that a new Stable release has passed the battle-testing to any extend. The word 'promoted' is too strong. a year ago |
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Stable is the most reliable version of Fedora CoreOS. Each Stable version has been field-tested as a Testing version before it is recommended for use. a year ago |
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Stable is the most reliable version of Fedora CoreOS. Each version has been tested in practice as a Testing version before it is recommended for use. a year ago |
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The sentences are pompeus. There is a jump from singular to plural, from 'version' to 'Releases'. The second sentence does not even suggest that a new Stable release has passed the battle-testing to any extend. The word 'promoted' is too strong. a year ago |
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The sentences are pompous. There is a jump from singular to plural, from 'version' to 'Releases'. The second sentence does not even suggest that a new Stable release has passed the battle-testing to any extend. The word 'promoted' is too strong.
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Stable is the most reliable version of Fedora CoreOS. Each Stable version has been field-tested as a Testing version before it is recommended for use.
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I may add that the second sentence describes two actions which are separated by the word 'before'. So the first action takes place before the second action. However, the two actions are described using a present tense. ('are battle-tested' has the present passive voice, and 'are being promoted' has the present passive voice continuous.) Therefore, the second sentence has a contradictio in terminis.
I may add that the second sentence describes two actions which are separated by the word 'before'. So the first action takes place before the second action. However, the two actions are described using a present tense. ('are battle-tested' has the present passive voice, and 'are being promoted' has the present passive voice continuous.) Therefore, the second sentence has a contradictio in terminis.
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